Wednesday, 29 February 2012

DESPARITY

Upon my arm rests my solemn face
Eyes, staring hopelessly
Frustration clouds me
Throwing shadows across my vision
My mind is frail
My hope is killed
LIghts blow out
With a quiet shout

Editor: Selina Liu
Literary Device: Oxymoron "quiet shout"
Two Senses: Sight, Sound
The poem is in the point of view of the man. The message for the audience or reader is that the man has reached an abyss in his life.